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Post by The ~Ice[y]~ is >Winged on Mar 14, 2008 22:23:48 GMT -5
Picture - MELODYWISH
Tama-chan
Name -
Melodywish
and
Tama-chan
Gender - both She-cats
Age - Melodywish: 16 moons
Tama-chan: 1.5 moons
Clan - IceClan
Rank - Melodywish: Warrior
Mary: Kit
Description -
Melodywish is a beautiful she-cat from japan.
She has thin and short white fur that cascades along her body.
Flowing around her ankles and pads, her nose, eyes and ears.
It comes to a smooth finish at the end of her long tail, as it flicks and twitches.
Her fur reflects brightly off the sunlight, making her beauty literally blinding.
She has one forest green eye and one dark brown one.
They dazzle and reflect, making beautiful patterns change and shift, like a kaleidescope. Her ears stick up, with small tufts of white fur springing out of them.
Her skin-pink claws flex as she sheaths and unsheathes them, making little marks in the snow, as the heat from her pads melt it away.
Her oval, skinny face turns left and right, as her ears angle themselves to hear the prey she creeps up on so stealthily, her thin figure weighting barely anything.
Tama-chan is also from Japan. Her kitty-pet name is exactly that.
She was abused by her nofurs, kicked and pulled on.
Her mangy, and matted fur is so dirty that you can barely see the creamy pelt underneath. If her pelt wasn't so dirty, if you looked past the huge tear through her right ear, the missing patches of fur on her sides, and the fact that she was missing her right eye, you could see her light grey splotches that cover the expanse of her spine, and go all the way to the tip of her tail.
Her one eye is a bright topaz colour, but you will barely ever see it gleaming. It has lost it's will to live. You would be lucky to even see it twitch, or follow the movement of a falling leaf.
Her mind is blank, she wont talk. She has suffered such pains that she has almost completely shut her self off.
She can still hunt, fight and eat, but she likes to be alone, onot even with Melodywish, her savior.
Her large ears hear nothing, her small nose smells, but acknowledges nothing, her eye is blank and wont respond, her voice works, but she doesn't use it, she can feel the grass tickle her pads, and feel the wind against the patches of missing fur on her sides, but she wont even shiver, or purr.
She was nothing, she will be nothing, she is nothing.
Personality -
Melodywish is an overall out going she-cat. She speaks the few Japanese words that she knows whenever she can, and she always tries to have a fun time.
She has never been good with kits, and fears that she made Tama-chans condition worse then it was originally. She stresses out over the smallest things, and likes everything to be perfect.
She plans out almost everything in her day, and judges what will start when by the position of the sun or moon.
She hates unexpected things, and anything that will ruin her perfectly planned out day.
She is a high believer in StarClan.
Tama-chan.
She was nothing, she will be nothing, she is nothing.
This is what she was lead to believe.
She responds to nothing. She does not have a personality.
She despises everything and has given up on StarClan.
Her mind functions fine, she just prefers not to use it.
She wont follow rules, she wont do anything.
She does not run, she does not walk. She does nothing.
If she moves, her mind will torment her, reminding her of her past, making her not want to move.
She will sometimes have spasms, where, in the end, she will cough up blood.
She feels the pain, she just does not care for it.
Why is she who she is? Why couldn't this happen to those disgusting cats like Melodywish?
She was great full that Melodywish rescued her from that hell hole that was her old home, but nothing will heal what had happened to her, all she can do is hope, with all her might, that something will come in time.
History -
Melodywish was always a nice cat. Brought up in a nice Clan in Japan; BlossomClan, enemies with CherryClan.
Her leader and best friend died. No, she didn't die. She was murdered. But not just murdered by anyone. The noble warrior, Lemonstrike. She had always hated Kanjistar, so she went ahead and killed her. Melodywish was deputy at the time, and was framed for the murder of her best friend, by Lemonstrike, of corse. She had always been more popular, more attractive, the Clan would follow her orders more then they would Melodywish's.
She was chased from the Clan, as Lemonstrike took charge of her Clan. Melodywish could do nothing, they would kill her, so she fled, like the coward she is.
She traveled for many days and many nights, before she came upon a nofur nest. She heard the nofur yelling and screaming, and she heard the shattering of glass.
She puffed her tail and unsheathed her claws, unable to relax, assuming the nofur was coming for her.
But then she heard the mewling of a kit, it's screeches in pain as the nofur threw pointed silvers things at it.
She could see the kit now, it jumped up on the windowsill.
Melodywish could see the kit more clearly as it dodged something sharp looking, as it smashed through the window.
The kit was bleeding from her right eye, and she had a tear going through her left ear. The kit was missing fur in many places, and what was left of it, was matted and covered in dirt.
She got closer. She could see the fear clear in the kits eye, as the nofur came at her with a weird, see-through green cylindrical thing, half filled with vile smelling water.
The kit was scared so much, she couldn't move.
It was then that Melodywish sprang into action, she jumped up on the other side of the window, and through the crack that the sharp object had made.
She grabbed the weightless kit by its scruff and ran out into the forest.
Tama-chan had never been cared for by anyone. She was taken away at birth, as she watched the ugly nofurs take her mother and kill her.
She had never known her father, but she knew that he would probably have just gotten up and walked away when he first saw her.
She was weak. Born weak, lives weak.
She was taken in by a nofur, male by the looks of it.
His shaved head, slanted eyes, white, dirty shirt and his unbuttoned black pants that he wore.
She realized that he had nothing. His nest was one room, a table, a bed, not even a separate den to sleep in, or cook his meals, or make dirt.
She would watch him everyday, as he came home with another female nofur, every day. This didn't last long, she noticed. They would all get up and leave in the morning, leaving some green looking thing, that she soon learned was paper ▬ no, money.
She would watch with interest, because she had nothing else to do. She would sneak out sometimes at night to get food. She was only a week old, barely able to fend for herself, but this nofur never fed her. No matter how much she cried, he would never acknowledged her existence.
Two days and two nights after the last she-nofur came, the he-nofur, she began to call him Jumper ▬ jumping from she to she ▬ when Jumper came home, he was carrying a strange bag, could it be food? No.
She smelled something disgusting. Vile. He took out a green cylinder, with a long neck, and something brown with small holes wedged through the opening of the neck.
She heard him singing something weird, sounding like, 'Wine wine wine.'
Is that what that bottle is? She assumed it was, as he wedged the brown holey thing out of the neck and began drinking the liquid.
Something that disgusting smelling can't be good for him.
She didn't care.
She went and sat on the windowsill, watching the moon rise in the sky, and the stars come out, something she did regularly.
She sighed, but stiffened as a pain shot through her ear.
Blood dripped to the floor. She turned around, ever so slightly, to see Jumper looking at her with a deranged expression.
She felt weird. This is fear.
She looked behind him, and saw three empty 'wines'.
Tama-chan looked at him in fear, as a shrill cry escaped from her lips. This seemed to amuse him.
She realized the wine had done this to him.
He through the bottle at her, hitting her in the face.
It cracked, almost in slow motion, and then shattered into her right eye.
She hissed in pain, as she felt her mind go numb, and her consciousness start to ebb away.
But she knew she couldn't sleep, if she did, he would kill her.
He grabbed a knife from the table, one of the big ones he cut his meat with, and threw it at her.
She ducked under out of reflex, as it smashed through the weak window.
She looked at him, bu he vision was clouded with the blood dripping from her right eye, and was making it's way over to her left one.
She was in horrible pain, her ear, her eye, and the pain that gnawed its way through her stomach.
Her vision doubled, but she could still feel the fear, and still feel the headache that just erupted from her brain, from the fumes of the vile.
He grabbed another knife, and held another wine in the other hand.
Was it going to end?
She felt her eyes closing. She felt like her body was being lifted.
Did she die? Was this what it was like?
This intelligent kit wanted to learn so much more before her death, but she guessed she couldn't escape from her destiny.
When she opened her eye, she was moving, cool, steady wind brushing against her fur, the constant swaying making her feel comfortable.
Then. she looked above her, to see the underside of the mouth of a white she-cat.
The she-cat glanced down at her, stopped running, then set her down gently on the ground.
"Now, what's your name?" The she-cat asked warmly.
But that warmth couldn't reach her where she was now. She could barely even hear the question.
But, soon, she realized that the wound in her eye was clean... no, not clean, her eye was gone!
covered by some strange white web. The cut in her ear had begun to heal, and she could feel the scab forming around the slits.
then, an echo... your name?
"T-Tama-chan..." She barely managed to whisper, in her barely Audible voice.
"I'm Melodywish." The she-cat looked at her in pity.
This infuriated Tama-chan.
"N-nice to meet you, Onee-san." Tama-chan used the honorific of sister, or a she-cat she respected.
And that was the last word she ever said.
She was nothing, she will be nothing, she is nothing.
Tama-chan couldn't walk, so Melodywish carried her.
With Melodywish's careful planning, she was able to win her way into the home of some nofur, they were nice, but Melodywish planned well, and got them sent off to a kennel.
This Kennel was across the sea, she had explained to Tama-chan, who didn't actually care.
When they arrived in the Kennel, the quickly made their escape, again. But it was freezing, with melting snow everywhere.
The could smell the faint trace of cats though, and Melodywish knew they came to the right place. She had heard about these clans, and their lives depended on them getting into one.
They made their way across the forest, swam across a river, and then ventured into the Clan called IceClan.
Relationships - Melodywish- I have been betrayed by those I trusted, the only one I know now, is Tama-chan
Tama-chan- I knew no one, I wont like anyone, I have no friends.
Motto/Themesong -
Tama-chan: She was nothing, she will be nothing, she is nothing.
((1935 words. If you don't accept this, I WILL MURDER!))
Tama-chan
Name -
Melodywish
and
Tama-chan
Gender - both She-cats
Age - Melodywish: 16 moons
Tama-chan: 1.5 moons
Clan - IceClan
Rank - Melodywish: Warrior
Mary: Kit
Description -
Melodywish is a beautiful she-cat from japan.
She has thin and short white fur that cascades along her body.
Flowing around her ankles and pads, her nose, eyes and ears.
It comes to a smooth finish at the end of her long tail, as it flicks and twitches.
Her fur reflects brightly off the sunlight, making her beauty literally blinding.
She has one forest green eye and one dark brown one.
They dazzle and reflect, making beautiful patterns change and shift, like a kaleidescope. Her ears stick up, with small tufts of white fur springing out of them.
Her skin-pink claws flex as she sheaths and unsheathes them, making little marks in the snow, as the heat from her pads melt it away.
Her oval, skinny face turns left and right, as her ears angle themselves to hear the prey she creeps up on so stealthily, her thin figure weighting barely anything.
Tama-chan is also from Japan. Her kitty-pet name is exactly that.
She was abused by her nofurs, kicked and pulled on.
Her mangy, and matted fur is so dirty that you can barely see the creamy pelt underneath. If her pelt wasn't so dirty, if you looked past the huge tear through her right ear, the missing patches of fur on her sides, and the fact that she was missing her right eye, you could see her light grey splotches that cover the expanse of her spine, and go all the way to the tip of her tail.
Her one eye is a bright topaz colour, but you will barely ever see it gleaming. It has lost it's will to live. You would be lucky to even see it twitch, or follow the movement of a falling leaf.
Her mind is blank, she wont talk. She has suffered such pains that she has almost completely shut her self off.
She can still hunt, fight and eat, but she likes to be alone, onot even with Melodywish, her savior.
Her large ears hear nothing, her small nose smells, but acknowledges nothing, her eye is blank and wont respond, her voice works, but she doesn't use it, she can feel the grass tickle her pads, and feel the wind against the patches of missing fur on her sides, but she wont even shiver, or purr.
She was nothing, she will be nothing, she is nothing.
Personality -
Melodywish is an overall out going she-cat. She speaks the few Japanese words that she knows whenever she can, and she always tries to have a fun time.
She has never been good with kits, and fears that she made Tama-chans condition worse then it was originally. She stresses out over the smallest things, and likes everything to be perfect.
She plans out almost everything in her day, and judges what will start when by the position of the sun or moon.
She hates unexpected things, and anything that will ruin her perfectly planned out day.
She is a high believer in StarClan.
Tama-chan.
She was nothing, she will be nothing, she is nothing.
This is what she was lead to believe.
She responds to nothing. She does not have a personality.
She despises everything and has given up on StarClan.
Her mind functions fine, she just prefers not to use it.
She wont follow rules, she wont do anything.
She does not run, she does not walk. She does nothing.
If she moves, her mind will torment her, reminding her of her past, making her not want to move.
She will sometimes have spasms, where, in the end, she will cough up blood.
She feels the pain, she just does not care for it.
Why is she who she is? Why couldn't this happen to those disgusting cats like Melodywish?
She was great full that Melodywish rescued her from that hell hole that was her old home, but nothing will heal what had happened to her, all she can do is hope, with all her might, that something will come in time.
History -
Melodywish was always a nice cat. Brought up in a nice Clan in Japan; BlossomClan, enemies with CherryClan.
Her leader and best friend died. No, she didn't die. She was murdered. But not just murdered by anyone. The noble warrior, Lemonstrike. She had always hated Kanjistar, so she went ahead and killed her. Melodywish was deputy at the time, and was framed for the murder of her best friend, by Lemonstrike, of corse. She had always been more popular, more attractive, the Clan would follow her orders more then they would Melodywish's.
She was chased from the Clan, as Lemonstrike took charge of her Clan. Melodywish could do nothing, they would kill her, so she fled, like the coward she is.
She traveled for many days and many nights, before she came upon a nofur nest. She heard the nofur yelling and screaming, and she heard the shattering of glass.
She puffed her tail and unsheathed her claws, unable to relax, assuming the nofur was coming for her.
But then she heard the mewling of a kit, it's screeches in pain as the nofur threw pointed silvers things at it.
She could see the kit now, it jumped up on the windowsill.
Melodywish could see the kit more clearly as it dodged something sharp looking, as it smashed through the window.
The kit was bleeding from her right eye, and she had a tear going through her left ear. The kit was missing fur in many places, and what was left of it, was matted and covered in dirt.
She got closer. She could see the fear clear in the kits eye, as the nofur came at her with a weird, see-through green cylindrical thing, half filled with vile smelling water.
The kit was scared so much, she couldn't move.
It was then that Melodywish sprang into action, she jumped up on the other side of the window, and through the crack that the sharp object had made.
She grabbed the weightless kit by its scruff and ran out into the forest.
Tama-chan had never been cared for by anyone. She was taken away at birth, as she watched the ugly nofurs take her mother and kill her.
She had never known her father, but she knew that he would probably have just gotten up and walked away when he first saw her.
She was weak. Born weak, lives weak.
She was taken in by a nofur, male by the looks of it.
His shaved head, slanted eyes, white, dirty shirt and his unbuttoned black pants that he wore.
She realized that he had nothing. His nest was one room, a table, a bed, not even a separate den to sleep in, or cook his meals, or make dirt.
She would watch him everyday, as he came home with another female nofur, every day. This didn't last long, she noticed. They would all get up and leave in the morning, leaving some green looking thing, that she soon learned was paper ▬ no, money.
She would watch with interest, because she had nothing else to do. She would sneak out sometimes at night to get food. She was only a week old, barely able to fend for herself, but this nofur never fed her. No matter how much she cried, he would never acknowledged her existence.
Two days and two nights after the last she-nofur came, the he-nofur, she began to call him Jumper ▬ jumping from she to she ▬ when Jumper came home, he was carrying a strange bag, could it be food? No.
She smelled something disgusting. Vile. He took out a green cylinder, with a long neck, and something brown with small holes wedged through the opening of the neck.
She heard him singing something weird, sounding like, 'Wine wine wine.'
Is that what that bottle is? She assumed it was, as he wedged the brown holey thing out of the neck and began drinking the liquid.
Something that disgusting smelling can't be good for him.
She didn't care.
She went and sat on the windowsill, watching the moon rise in the sky, and the stars come out, something she did regularly.
She sighed, but stiffened as a pain shot through her ear.
Blood dripped to the floor. She turned around, ever so slightly, to see Jumper looking at her with a deranged expression.
She felt weird. This is fear.
She looked behind him, and saw three empty 'wines'.
Tama-chan looked at him in fear, as a shrill cry escaped from her lips. This seemed to amuse him.
She realized the wine had done this to him.
He through the bottle at her, hitting her in the face.
It cracked, almost in slow motion, and then shattered into her right eye.
She hissed in pain, as she felt her mind go numb, and her consciousness start to ebb away.
But she knew she couldn't sleep, if she did, he would kill her.
He grabbed a knife from the table, one of the big ones he cut his meat with, and threw it at her.
She ducked under out of reflex, as it smashed through the weak window.
She looked at him, bu he vision was clouded with the blood dripping from her right eye, and was making it's way over to her left one.
She was in horrible pain, her ear, her eye, and the pain that gnawed its way through her stomach.
Her vision doubled, but she could still feel the fear, and still feel the headache that just erupted from her brain, from the fumes of the vile.
He grabbed another knife, and held another wine in the other hand.
Was it going to end?
She felt her eyes closing. She felt like her body was being lifted.
Did she die? Was this what it was like?
This intelligent kit wanted to learn so much more before her death, but she guessed she couldn't escape from her destiny.
When she opened her eye, she was moving, cool, steady wind brushing against her fur, the constant swaying making her feel comfortable.
Then. she looked above her, to see the underside of the mouth of a white she-cat.
The she-cat glanced down at her, stopped running, then set her down gently on the ground.
"Now, what's your name?" The she-cat asked warmly.
But that warmth couldn't reach her where she was now. She could barely even hear the question.
But, soon, she realized that the wound in her eye was clean... no, not clean, her eye was gone!
covered by some strange white web. The cut in her ear had begun to heal, and she could feel the scab forming around the slits.
then, an echo... your name?
"T-Tama-chan..." She barely managed to whisper, in her barely Audible voice.
"I'm Melodywish." The she-cat looked at her in pity.
This infuriated Tama-chan.
"N-nice to meet you, Onee-san." Tama-chan used the honorific of sister, or a she-cat she respected.
And that was the last word she ever said.
She was nothing, she will be nothing, she is nothing.
Tama-chan couldn't walk, so Melodywish carried her.
With Melodywish's careful planning, she was able to win her way into the home of some nofur, they were nice, but Melodywish planned well, and got them sent off to a kennel.
This Kennel was across the sea, she had explained to Tama-chan, who didn't actually care.
When they arrived in the Kennel, the quickly made their escape, again. But it was freezing, with melting snow everywhere.
The could smell the faint trace of cats though, and Melodywish knew they came to the right place. She had heard about these clans, and their lives depended on them getting into one.
They made their way across the forest, swam across a river, and then ventured into the Clan called IceClan.
Relationships - Melodywish- I have been betrayed by those I trusted, the only one I know now, is Tama-chan
Tama-chan- I knew no one, I wont like anyone, I have no friends.
Motto/Themesong -
Tama-chan: She was nothing, she will be nothing, she is nothing.
((1935 words. If you don't accept this, I WILL MURDER!))
