Post by [Ridge] of [Sapphire] light on Jan 6, 2008 19:41:28 GMT -5
Description
Brokenflame is a huge calico maine coon with tri colored fur. He has long black and orange fur that covers his back and tail, while his eyes are sulfer yellow on a white face. His tail is very bushy and luxerious, like a feather from a phoenix. His paws are snowy white and his fur is usually messy, because he doesn't really care what he looks like. Brokenflame dosen't have much time to groom it, because of all of his duties. He has long and thick fur that keeps him warm. His claws are strong though he is getting on in years. His teeth are yellow with age but as strong as they were when he was young. His legs are thick and stocky much like his body. His head is big and wide, with a long skinny muzzle.
Personality
Brokenflame is full of wisdom and compassion. He has a heart of gold for his clan and is eternally loyal to them. He will never betray his clanmates or hiss at Coldstorm, his mate. He is quick-minded and has a cunning and willing soul. He loves kits and is glad that, though his mate is baren, they decided, in their old age, to take in a young abbandond kit. His daughter is cunning like him and he had hoped one day to train her, as his last apprentice. HE is also fond of a young she-cat named Avalanchepaw, whom he is now training.Decemberpaw is probably very angry with him, but that's alright, he wishes to fix his mistake with the Avalanchepaw from his past.
History
He was born into GlacierClan and grew up there. He has always been loyal. His mother was killed by a monster while she was trying to teach him how to cross the thunderpath. He was then apprenticed to his father who was also killed.
Without a mentor, he was then apprenticed to another warrior and grew into one himself. He was strong, sure, and confident. One day, on a patrol, he found a young kitten and brought him back to the clan. They called him Darkkit and he grew into the fearfully strong and cunning warrior Darkstorm. He became possesd by the rogue Shadeclaw and was killed in a battle by a loner, He now walks with Starclan.
Brokenflame met Coldstorm just before the battle with ColdClan and they have been mates ever since. She was injured in the battle with AvalancheClan and Brokenflame has not forgiven himself for her twistedpaw. He feels he chould have rescued her but didn't.
He had one apprentice. His name was Avalanchepaw. He was getting ready to request him to be a warrior when Avalanchepaw and his mate Spicepaw went for a walk and were attacked by an arcticfox. Avalanchepaw was killed and Spicepaw left the clan and killed the fox. Brokenflame has never forgotten his apprentice, or Spicepaw.
He and Coldstorm were out on a walk oneday talking about kits, when a small bundle was found infront of them. Starclan had sent them a kit, whose name was Decemberkit. They are raising her as their own and will never forget the great blessing bestowed on them By starcaln.
Another kit has now entered their lives, One by the Name of Avalnchekit, whose name alone brings memories back to Brokenflame and worries him to no end. He has vowed to take this kit in as well, and perhaps watch him grow into a warrior.
Relationships
Mate-Coldstorm
ex-best friend-Darkstorm
Rival/enemies-Shadowgrass, Mercurypelt, Deadleg
Motto: Teach the young the mistakes you made so they will not have to make them.